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#1 Confirm Pentecost

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Posted 15 September 2009 - 06:27 PM

Been kinda busy lately with school, here's one of the things I was working on, logos were updated, but I haven't uploaded that version:

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And something for fun based off the 9 contest on dA. Still don't know if I want to enter...

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Posted 15 September 2009 - 06:31 PM

The top one looks great. The bodies look great and the motion of the piece look fantastic.

As for the bottom one. Keyblades? Dude, that is so lame.

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Posted 15 September 2009 - 06:37 PM

That's some awesome liquify effects =D


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#4 Knift-e

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Posted 15 September 2009 - 07:51 PM

You need to make a tut on your style. O_O I always love it.

My girlfriend is a beast fencer.

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Posted 16 September 2009 - 04:33 AM

View PostSavior, on 15 September 2009 - 06:31 PM, said:

The top one looks great. The bodies look great and the motion of the piece look fantastic.

As for the bottom one. Keyblades? Dude, that is so lame.

Not keyblades, just keys XD. Bah, I wouldn't do anything like that man. I don't think you know how I feel about fan art being some of the most popular stuff on dA.


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Posted 16 September 2009 - 01:58 PM

It came out nicely.
One thing that looks strange is the torso on the first person.
It is probably just me but the wrinkles in the shirt give it an odd look.
It almost looks like you are seeing the front of him when you are suppose to be seeing the back.

I like how the second person was done.
Another suggestion is the shadow of the second guy.
There is a pointy object on the right side of the shadow, but there is nothing on the guy that would resemble that shape of a shadow.

I like the second project you did too.

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Posted 16 September 2009 - 07:57 PM

View PostConfirm Pentecost, on 16 September 2009 - 04:33 AM, said:

Not keyblades, just keys XD. Bah, I wouldn't do anything like that man. I don't think you know how I feel about fan art being some of the most popular stuff on dA.


Thanks Chido
Thanks Knift, I may make one sometime. What does she fence? Foil, Saber or Epee?
Foil.


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Posted 17 September 2009 - 06:19 PM

View Postjohnny, on 16 September 2009 - 01:58 PM, said:

It came out nicely.
One thing that looks strange is the torso on the first person.
It is probably just me but the wrinkles in the shirt give it an odd look.
It almost looks like you are seeing the front of him when you are suppose to be seeing the back.

I like how the second person was done.
Another suggestion is the shadow of the second guy.
There is a pointy object on the right side of the shadow, but there is nothing on the guy that would resemble that shape of a shadow.

I like the second project you did too.
I kind of don't see what you say for the first guy, but I'll keep it in mind when I make other flyers. As for the shadows, they're just exaggerations, I didn't pay too much attention.


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Foil.

Ah, I fence saber. I'd like to learn foil someday though.

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Posted 19 September 2009 - 11:07 PM

First one is really cool. You did a really nice job on the people.

The drawing creeps me out tbh, but it's nice in the creepy way, it's creative.

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Posted 20 September 2009 - 12:41 PM

Lol it does? How so? I guess it's fitting, 9 and Tim Burton..creepy sector.

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Posted 22 September 2009 - 08:34 PM

I can see what johnny is saying about the first figure in the fencing piece. His um... rear end resembles a groin a little, and that can make it look like he is facing you at first glance. Other than that it's awesome, great action poses and the effects emphasize the motion even more.

The second one is cool, the drawing mannequin concept is neat. Have you written him a back story? It would be cool to know the function of the locks, and keys, and stuff.

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Posted 22 September 2009 - 08:37 PM

View PostMystic, on 22 September 2009 - 08:34 PM, said:

I can see what johnny is saying about the first figure in the fencing piece. His um... rear end resembles a groin a little, and that can make it look like he is facing you at first glance. Other than that awesome piece, great action poses and the effects emphasize the motion even more.

The second one is cool, the drawing mannequin concept is neat. Have you written him a back story? It would be cool to know the function of the locks, and keys, and stuff.
I think he'll look better with him facing us, and it'll be a quicker fix just to switch his feet.


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Posted 23 September 2009 - 05:42 AM

View PostMystic, on 22 September 2009 - 08:34 PM, said:

I can see what johnny is saying about the first figure in the fencing piece. His um... rear end resembles a groin a little, and that can make it look like he is facing you at first glance. Other than that it's awesome, great action poses and the effects emphasize the motion even more.

The second one is cool, the drawing mannequin concept is neat. Have you written him a back story? It would be cool to know the function of the locks, and keys, and stuff.
Ah I see...Okay, oops, I kinda forgot that fencing jackets don't go so low on the back. Shhh, don't tell anyone in the club, we've already go the poster up XD.

Yeah, he's got a camera eyet that records unceasingly (except during review), and he collects keys to open doors to record more information (and then I saw the movie and found out 3 & 4 do whole record everything thing too.). Since the locks are heavy he's got a cane, the two keys on his back he doesn't know what they're for, but he's made it his purpose to find why people had to keep things locked.

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I think he'll look better with him facing us, and it'll be a quicker fix just to switch his feet.

He'd be lunging in correctly though.

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Posted 23 September 2009 - 06:17 AM

the first one looks pretty awesome. I love how you made the clash and the fighters as well. Very nice job man...

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Posted 23 September 2009 - 05:05 PM

View PostConfirm Pentecost, on 23 September 2009 - 05:42 AM, said:

He'd be lunging in correctly though.
Oh I see. yeah, that seems like a long fix.


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Posted 24 September 2009 - 07:59 AM

Is that poster gonna be hung up on campus?

I'd love to say I know the guy who made it.


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Posted 24 September 2009 - 04:21 PM

I accidently + your post trying to click the quote button XD.

It's on Ferrel Auditorium's bulletin board. I'll make other ones for different parts of the campus.

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Posted 24 September 2009 - 04:53 PM

View PostConfirm Pentecost, on 24 September 2009 - 04:21 PM, said:

I accidently + your post trying to click the quote button XD.

It's on Ferrel Auditorium's bulletin board. I'll make other ones for different parts of the campus.

I think I'm gonna have to get you to make me some campaign posters when I run for Senate next year. lol.


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Posted 24 September 2009 - 09:53 PM

NYU > UCF


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Posted 25 September 2009 - 01:37 PM

View PostKnift-E, on 24 September 2009 - 09:53 PM, said:

NYU > UCF

NYU women look like men.


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