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Started by Ominous , Nov 03 2009 01:32 AM

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#1 Ominous

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Posted 03 November 2009 - 01:32 AM

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#2 johnny

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Posted 03 November 2009 - 05:45 AM

The only complaint I have is that the BG is a little monotone.
Maybe put some more color into and/or detail.
Other than that, the sig came out nicely.

#3 Mikhail

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Posted 03 November 2009 - 08:18 AM

I see an issue with the light source. Your render is already dark on one side and light on the other meaning it had a light source to start. I would recommend removing the extra light source in the bottom left since it has very little reason to be there. Try blending it a bit more as well, otherwise, this is pretty good.

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#4 Ominous

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Posted 03 November 2009 - 03:45 PM

Awesome, not nearly as bad of complaints as I thought I would get.

I'll try out your suggestion Savior. But Johnny i'm too afraid i'd ruin the sig lol.

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#5 Knift-e

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Posted 03 November 2009 - 05:31 PM

I would add a little more yellow, make it a little less monotone, and keeping with the analogous colors.


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