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#1 LucK

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 08:34 AM

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Hey guys how are you all :)? Haven't made something in tooooo long, but I had the urge and time and was like lets do this! Anyways I wanted to ask for some advice, I'm not sure what else to do so was hoping for some suggestions. Really is nice to post here again ^_^.

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#2 Ego

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 10:22 AM

I feel that there's nothing in the picture besides the render. I'd like to see something else in the background. All the bright white is too much contrast to the stock for me.


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#3 Knift-e

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 08:54 PM

LucK!

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I actually like the contrast and over the years I've noticed your work is very minimalistic with a touch of high contrast. Very avant-garde (not the member).
The flow gets cut off by the red smudge that doesn't follow the rest of it, in my opinion.


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#4 LucK

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Posted 14 May 2011 - 09:53 AM

Thanks dude, I just enjoy making something appear like it was actually there when it wasn't. Photo Manipulation is fun ^^. I'll keep working on it man, post v2 soon.
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#5 Chid0x

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Posted 14 May 2011 - 12:04 PM

I was also going to say something about the red parts.
The red at the end of the arrow/hand us perfect imo, but the stronger red on his shoulder....idk maybe brighten it up/smudge it and make it look like the lighter red.


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#6 LucK

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Posted 16 May 2011 - 12:51 PM

V2 is up. I may have overdone it a bit, but here you go.
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#7 Knift-e

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Posted 22 May 2011 - 12:51 PM

I like V2 better.
The removal of the clusters of colors in front of the guy's head seem to make it better.


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